The version that displays the tiers before the “About” section is really frustrating me. It makes it look like my “About” is tied to my “goals” - which isn’t the impression I want to give potential patrons - and it makes it look like the page is asking for money first and explaining why later, which is a big turn-off for me, and doesn’t give me a lot of confidence as far as sharing it out.
I like the tier boxes. I really want the “About” section to stand out more, since that’s the area where we really have control & get to make our pitch.